Talk:River/@comment-24216186-20160506044248/@comment-7270135-20160509051139

OH MY GOD NO WHEN YOU MENTION THE TORTURE STUFF IT BECOMES SO SAD! Because he doesn't deserve all that horrible pain and suffering thrust upon him, and you've mentioned how he would have dreams and hallucinations of everyone he loves dying, and that he wouldn't believe reality when the group comes to save him. Yeah, that's what I'm most worried about. I don't want to make that their most separating factor, but I can't make them interesting characters so far. I want to find a way to isolate them for a short bit somehow but I can't think of anything.